Originally Posted by HolyJose2391
We weren't arguing, at least I don't think we were.
Anyways, read the first 3 quarters of the show. I love the location, very creative. With a high flying show, in an airplane hanger, it fits perfectly. Although for someone that doesn't read the shows often, I don't know who Stanley and Ricky are, and it doesn't seem to say that. Although I know that my Havoc episode I wrote recently, I (for the first time ever) jumped right into commentary instead of giving a description of the arena and commentators, but I still gave their last names in the first speaking lines.
I loved the Jman promo at the beginning too.
I think the format is a little hard to read though, with actions being bolded, and speaking being italicized. It seems like it's making the unimportant stuff stand out, and the important stuff skipped over.
Just my opinions though. Keep it up!