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    Quote Originally Posted by Poot-Hair View Post
    Just read Octane and I must say, great job Jose and crew! The so was excellently put together, and I loved how everything flowed.

    I must say, I'm pretty sure the new GM Olivia is a lesbian....jus' sayin'
    DON'T think I've forgotten about you. I haven't been on long enough to give your comments a well deserved reply. It'll be soon.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rated_R(ob)KO View Post
    DON'T think I've forgotten about you. I haven't been on long enough to give your comments a well deserved reply. It'll be soon.
    Err umm, alright baws. Whatever you want to do

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    Quote Originally Posted by Poot-Hair View Post
    QUICK let's all ignore this childish cheap shot aimed at the JBW Alum that has busted their ass to put out a show.
    Lol bro, cool your beans. I was just joking around...I thought everyone joked around in here?

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    You know instead of arguing....show feedback would be great
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    Quote Originally Posted by HolyJose2391 View Post
    You know instead of arguing....show feedback would be great
    We weren't arguing, at least I don't think we were.

    Anyways, read the first 3 quarters of the show. I love the location, very creative. With a high flying show, in an airplane hanger, it fits perfectly. Although for someone that doesn't read the shows often, I don't know who Stanley and Ricky are, and it doesn't seem to say that. Although I know that my Havoc episode I wrote recently, I (for the first time ever) jumped right into commentary instead of giving a description of the arena and commentators, but I still gave their last names in the first speaking lines.

    I loved the Jman promo at the beginning too.

    I think the format is a little hard to read though, with actions being bolded, and speaking being italicized. It seems like it's making the unimportant stuff stand out, and the important stuff skipped over.

    Just my opinions though. Keep it up!

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    HJ, the main event was awesome bro!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Snair View Post
    Octane was epic! Awesome work by everyone involved and Brandon delivered the funniest segment of the show.
    Thank you, thank you, theres more of that to come.

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    Double post so what lol

    Right just read OCTANE. Great stuff, I liked the little hidden highlight of using the AWF music for the guys, even the Jabe guys.

    The colours make it easier to read, and it flowed well in my opinion.

    It was well written, and when I did the Brandon promo I did not realise there were other Pokemon references lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by HeelTurn View Post
    Double post so what lol

    Right just read OCTANE. Great stuff, I liked the little hidden highlight of using the AWF music for the guys, even the Jabe guys.

    The colours make it easier to read, and it flowed well in my opinion.

    It was well written, and when I did the Brandon promo I did not realise there were other Pokemon references lol
    Lol true story I could NOT find Harry Richard's theme anywhere and said "Fuck it he's getting the Pokemon theme song" Roba when you read it hope you found it funny.
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    Quote Originally Posted by No_1eddiefan View Post
    HJ, the main event was awesome bro!
    Thanks man that was a fun one to write. I LOVE the hanger idea (well mainly cuz it was mine but whatevs lol) seriously though you can do so much with the SuperFlys. Expect A LOT of stunts I hope it made it feel like how ROH has their ring so close to the barricade that both the ring and barricade can be used such as that DDT Avidico did. (that came to me I was day dreaming I was going against Kevin Steen for the ROH world title and thought of that backflip DDT onto the barricade and thought shit that's awesome)
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