Alright well i'll have a go at this altered feedback form, see how things go.
Name Of Show Being Graded: Infernoooo Bitcheeees!
Storyline Development: It's difficult to really rate how story lines are going right now, when really there aren't many story lines at all. Bare with me, what I mean is we've got a show coming up where people get to vote for the matches they want to see, by definition this is completely random as people will vote for whatever they want, not whatever is best for the fed. So until after threat of the net, i'm going to abstain from this until we get back to a more structured format.
Character Development: Again this one is difficult to rate, let me be completely honest, around half of the promos on the show were phoned in and didn't grab my attention in the slightest. However, there were a few good promos and situations on the show which painted people in a positive light. For this section i'm going to single out Mike Hawk for coming a long way since he started, he actually makes you want to know more, you dig?
Best Feud: Isn't this really the same question as best story line development? Or are we supposed to look at this from a strictly promo driven point of view? In the case of the latter, then you have to say Jameson is making me want to see the outcome of his feud with Strem, no offence to the King but it's about time we got a new champ around here, share the love ya know.
Worst Feud: â€‹ Man I got a few to pick from here, some completely made me go to sleep. Including one of my own, which is what i'm going to pick. HW vs JM has turned sour in my opinion, probably because outside of the Carlin promo so little emphasis was given to it. Much prefer a joint promo to a random match. Actually, a joint promo wasn't even necessary, JM making their presence known after the HW victory would have made this one of the better feuds going. Or at least some mention in the JM promo about the match.
Best Promo: Already mentioned him, and he pretty much gets a mention every week, mostly because I won't vote for myself and no one else seems bothered about raising their game. Jameson gets this for me.
Worst Promo: Ohh ho ho there's a few to pick from, and despite myself making it look like I take pleasure in the fact, I really don't. Singling someone out would be unfair, you guys know who you are.
Parts That Excelled: Sure, I liked that Andy Cannon put up a good fight against Strem and the match itself looked good, things are looking thin up top and Inferno really needs 3-4 new main eventers as the top of the card looks pretty much word for word as it did when I left temporarily last year. The main event was just as well written, actually makes me wonder if EWNCW are going to start falling in line with the match standards set by IWA and WWE Fed. Tommy Thunder does well as a reluctant champion, as I know behind the scenes TT doesn't actually want the belt as I tried to force it on him back when I was creative as there literally was no one else good enough. Additional matches that looked quite good were Ano Doom vs Michael (albeit with some dodgy Lansdale commentary), and HW vs Hostile Takeover was decent despite my negative comments on the feud.
Parts Needing Improvement: Add a little emotion to your promos, don't be cookie cutter, try and act it out in your head before you click send. If it's not something you would watch and be happy with, chances are the people reading it will feel the same. You'll find that you'll have a lot more fun if you actually get out of the box.
Overall Experience: It was a decent show, there are some matches i'm looking forward to at TotN and some others that i'm not. I think Eddie summed it up previously very well by saying that not every feud demands a PPV match, I think anyone who would moan at being left off isn't looking at the bigger picture. You've not asked for a grade so I won't give one, suffice to say however it wasn't the best Inferno ever, but by far it was not the worst. Keep plugging away!
Boom! Head shot.