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    Favorite Moment: The finish. Cool stuff.

    Best Match: Divine-Sseraphim

    Best Promo: Too many to pick one. Eddie-Van, Shaz, ChaCha x2 stick out.

    Best Piece of Booking: How Shaz-Bodom was booked throughout. At first, the only reason I gave a damn about this feud is 'cause I'm a Shaz mark. Now, though, I'm sold.

    Best Debut (when applicable): Don't think there was one.

    Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like: No Jman promo.

    Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: Not really.

    Any Other Positives: Bodom promos are always fun.

    How would you improve the negative comments (if any): Nope.

    Overall Show Grade: B-



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    Quote Originally Posted by K2Jelly View Post
    Romulus: No. I make examples out of bellicose heretics. You were no exception. And even now, as I express antipathy for your well-being, I can't help but harbor a morsel of consternation for you. Is a blunt blow to your empty skull all it takes for you to cry foul? You won't persist for 5 minutes with that feeble of a constitution. Perhaps forfeiting is your best course of action.
    Jman: It's not the shot to the head itself, Ronaldo, it's the cheap ass timing of it. With a half second warning, I would've ducked and kicked your lights out.



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  3. #35433
    Quote Originally Posted by Tommy Thunder View Post
    Still looking for some more feedback on Rage please guys.
    I've only seen one or 2 feedback forms thus far.
    Comin now playa just let me have a look at it first.



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    Favorite Moment: My match with Bodom. Now I can rub it in that I've beaten him.

    Best Match: Seraphim vs. Divine for sure.

    Best Promo:
    Kyo/Van. I've always been a fan of their chemistry.

    Best Piece of Booking: ​Can't really decide. Nothing stuck out for me.

    Best Debut (when applicable): Wasn't one this time around.

    Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like: I would have to say the fact that I had to give two promos. STOP OVERWORKING ME!

    Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: ambrose.gif

    Any Other Positives: Bodom, Shaz, the Ignition Division.

    How would you improve the negative comments (if any): Just give me a pay rise for that extra work.

    Overall Show Grade: B. Pretty good show


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    Quote Originally Posted by thejman93 View Post
    Jman: It's not the shot to the head itself, Ronaldo, it's the cheap ass timing of it. With a half second warning, I would've ducked and kicked your lights out.
    Ronaldo: Fine. Shall I delegate a carrier pigeon to inform you of my next envisaged plan of assault?


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    Favorite Moment: I liked Prophecy kickin Jose's ass, was a good one there.

    Best Match: Gonna go with Double R and Bodom, nice touch with this to me. Maybe more for just I like the booking of it, but still.

    Best Promo: I liked Dimension's and Bodom, that guy's really runnin hot this go around!

    Best Piece of Booking: ​Again , Bodom and R Square was good as it helped both men look good, Bodom needs something like that with the PPV match coming up.

    Best Debut (when applicable): N/A

    Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like: Not sure if its booking related, but sometime I don't always know exactly what every finisher is in reality, or have the roster open ready to scan the whole thing, (LOL), So it would help to allow the flow of things to go better by explaining the moves as to what they are, as I've seen done a few times.

    Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: Bull's had a few typos/errors here and there, usual of TTC though in general .

    Any Other Positives: I like the whole Bodom standing up for what he believes in. SHUT UP FAT BOY! ,making a comeback as well. Kind of unrelated, but I just noticed Reiko has a KILLER theme!

    How would you improve the negative comments (if any): Sure, Time of a bit more and double checking promos helps majorly, believe me, I know. Just explain in more depth the finishers to, nothing major.

    Overall Show Grade B +



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    Thanks to K2, Jman and SB for the feedback.

    Rage promo assignments will go out tonight!
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    All promo assignments minus 1 are out. The reason one hasn't gone out is because Jman's inbox is full, so once he clears that, the final one will be out too.

    Please get them in by the deadline set in the PM.

    In the meantime, feedback on Rage please guys.
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    Had a quick read of Rage earlier. Will read it in more depth tomorrow and give feedback then.


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  10. #35440
    Inferno update...

    wrote three matches today.

    Tomorrow: Start getting Strem's stuff. Finish up what I need too on Inferno(Before match commentary). Need one promo back, already talked to the guy about.

    Should be an interesting show, since a lot of things had to be changed around. xD
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