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    Quote Originally Posted by K2Jelly View Post
    *The Primetime Players are all sitting on the couch watching the Beer Money TV advertisement on the flat screen television in the locker room. Darren Young shakes his head and reaches for the remote. Turning off the TV with a swift thumb movement, he tosses the remote away from him, disregarding the loud 'thunk' it makes when it hits the floor.*

    Darren Young: What kind of garbage was that?

    A.W.: I'll tell you what it was; it was a desperate cry for attention was what it was. I'm telling you fellas, those two are desperate. Why else would they need to make a TV ad just so they could make fun of us? They can't do it in the ring so they've gotta make a commercial doing it instead. Those fools can't touch us. We're the Primetime Players for a reason. We;'re one step closer to winning those tag team championships. Right now, our focus is on the Kings of Wrestling and All American Perfection. Don't let 'em distract ya. You've gotten too far to let them trip you up.

    *A.W. stands on his feet and pats both Young and O'Neil on the shoulders.*

    A.W.: Now c'mon, fellas, we're nearing Christmas and I just arranged a little Christmas shindig at the Fours Seasons Hotel in D.C. as a little Christmas present for the two of you for all of your hard work.

    O'Neil: You serious, man?! Aw, thank you!

    *O'Neil gets off of the couch and hugs A.W. in a bear hug.*

    A.W.: Release the grip, brother!

    *O'Neil lets go.*

    O'Neil: My bad.

    A.W.: It's cool. Save the huggin' for the ladies, my friend. They don't call you "Sex Appeal" Titus O'Neil for nothing. Now, we ready to go?

    Young & O'Neil: Uh huh!

    A.W.: Alright then, let's get going!

    *Young and O'Neil chant "Millions of Dollars" behind A.W. as they go off.*
    *Beer Money had been overhearing The Primetime Players.*

    James: So, three guys go to a room for christmas. I wonder what can happen?

    Bobby: I have finally come to the conclusion they are some naughty boys. I can only imagine what they asked Santa for.

    A STAR WAS BORN!!!! #ThankYouBrock

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    Looking forward to nitto
     

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    Quote Originally Posted by bearkg88 View Post
    Looking forward to nitto
    Same here. Too bad that one promo slowed everything down.


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    Working on the main event now.

    Gonna begin to post within the next hour hopefully


    Kyojin

    Final ICW World Champion

    eWN eFed Superstar of the Year 2012

    ICW/IWA Superstar of the Year 2012

    Final HWA Adrenaline Champion

    Final EWNCW Rage Ignition Champion

    Former EWNCW Tag Team Champion (as part of Hot Wasabi)

    EWNCW Tag Team of the Year 2013 (as part of Hot Wasabi)

    Former 2x IWA Endurance Champion

    Former 2x ICW Insanity Champion

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    Quote Originally Posted by No_1eddiefan View Post
    Working on the main event now.

    Gonna begin to post within the next hour hopefully
    8 minutes later, I finish the show.

    Posting now!


    Kyojin

    Final ICW World Champion

    eWN eFed Superstar of the Year 2012

    ICW/IWA Superstar of the Year 2012

    Final HWA Adrenaline Champion

    Final EWNCW Rage Ignition Champion

    Former EWNCW Tag Team Champion (as part of Hot Wasabi)

    EWNCW Tag Team of the Year 2013 (as part of Hot Wasabi)

    Former 2x IWA Endurance Champion

    Former 2x ICW Insanity Champion

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    Show's fully up!

    Feedback form is below.

    Best Match:
    Best Promo:
    Best Piece of Booking:
    Best Debut *when applicable*:
    Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like:
    Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved:
    Any Other Positives:
    Any Other Constructive Criticism:
    Overall Show Grade:


    Kyojin

    Final ICW World Champion

    eWN eFed Superstar of the Year 2012

    ICW/IWA Superstar of the Year 2012

    Final HWA Adrenaline Champion

    Final EWNCW Rage Ignition Champion

    Former EWNCW Tag Team Champion (as part of Hot Wasabi)

    EWNCW Tag Team of the Year 2013 (as part of Hot Wasabi)

    Former 2x IWA Endurance Champion

    Former 2x ICW Insanity Champion

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    Alrighty, was reading along as it was posted so I think i'll get in first with some feedback.

    Best Match: Tyson Kidd vs Brock Lesnar, clear and concise, throw in some believable action and controversy and you have a good match!



    Best Promo: I'm gonna give this one to Edge, straight to the point with no conjecture and had me looking forward to the GAB main event!


    Best Piece of Booking: Dean Ambrose being carted off once again, i'm really excited for his actual in ring debut (obviously) and this is adding to my anticipation.


    Best Debut *when applicable*: N/A (I didn't see one anyway)


    Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like: I'm not sure I would have had Eve go over Lita, not under her current gimmick.


    Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: None, on weekly shows I prefer short matches. Save the blockbusters for PPV. Now this one might get me a little hate, but i'm not a fan of reading a promo that takes up 2 pages, too long. I like a long promo, don't get me wrong as i've written a few of them, but I rarely break 6000 characters. It feels like a chore, ya know?


    Any Other Positives: Promos as a whole were actually really good, the show was posted all at once too which is what I like to see!


    Any Other Constructive Criticism: The above sums it up.


    Overall Show Grade: B-
     
    Efed stuff that doesn't matter

    1 x IWA World Heavyweight Champion - Malcolm Adonis

    Current WWE World Heavyweight Champion - Dean Ambrose

    1 x EWNCW Tag Team Champion - Malcolm Adonis w/ Kyojin

    Current No 1 Contender to the EWNCW Title - Arthur Lansdale

    I lied, it matters.




    "Tell me.. what is insane about wanting to create perfection? I'd be crazy not to." - Jarvis Cole

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    Also, Heath Ledger Joker FTW!

     
    Efed stuff that doesn't matter

    1 x IWA World Heavyweight Champion - Malcolm Adonis

    Current WWE World Heavyweight Champion - Dean Ambrose

    1 x EWNCW Tag Team Champion - Malcolm Adonis w/ Kyojin

    Current No 1 Contender to the EWNCW Title - Arthur Lansdale

    I lied, it matters.




    "Tell me.. what is insane about wanting to create perfection? I'd be crazy not to." - Jarvis Cole

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    Promo of the week was very difficult to call. I'm gonna go for Tyler Reks- just ahead of Tyson Kidd/Brock Lesnar.


    Kyojin

    Final ICW World Champion

    eWN eFed Superstar of the Year 2012

    ICW/IWA Superstar of the Year 2012

    Final HWA Adrenaline Champion

    Final EWNCW Rage Ignition Champion

    Former EWNCW Tag Team Champion (as part of Hot Wasabi)

    EWNCW Tag Team of the Year 2013 (as part of Hot Wasabi)

    Former 2x IWA Endurance Champion

    Former 2x ICW Insanity Champion

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    Best Match: The Rock v. Edge

    Best Promo: I'll give this honor to...Anderson/Daniels.


    Best Piece of Booking: Sable getting in Lita's face after costing her the match with Eve. It allows Sable to get noticed and it reminds everyone that Lita has the potential to shake things up in the Triple Threat match as well. The second best piece of booking is Edge interfering in the main event and taking out both Lesnar AND Kidd. Edge seemed like a third wheel, in comparison to Lesnar and Kidd, but having him come out on strong makes him look like a credible threat.


    Best Debut *when applicable*: Weren't any debuts.


    Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like: Edge getting the victory on the Rock via roll-up. I feel like someone like The Rock shouldn't get pinned with a cheap move like that. Perhaps if Edge hit the spear when the Rock turns around and THEN gets the win, that would have been a bit better.


    Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: I'm going to be honest, it didn't like Cryme Tyme's promo. Now, don't get me wrong, it wasn't bad or anything but I don't like the fact that they had to turn heel just to get a point across. The thing is, the most prominently featured tag teams, PTP's, KOW and AAP are all heels and with CT turning heel, that makes the heel to face tag team ratio even lower than before.


    Any Other Positives: Rey's promos have been improving, Ambrose was was compelling as ever and the Road to Triumph is getting plugged and pushed as a major thing.


    Any Other Constructive Criticism:

    A couple things:

    1. The matches didn't seem drawn out enough until it ended. What I mean is, after the video, there's a point where the rest of the match is hand written but for each match, it seemed pretty short. All of the tension seemed to just deflate with how quickly everything ended.

    2. Reks didn't have the chance to retaliate after getting screwed last week. Sure, he had time to cut a promo but maybe him having a match, where he could bow off some steam against an annoying heel or a member of S.C.U.M could have sufficed.

    3. What up with Shane? He became impartial out of nowhere and started treating everyone on the roster fairly. That's not a bad thing but a plausible and smooth transition would have been better.

    Overall Show Grade: C+. Average show, decent build up, nothing too special about it.


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