That'll be a fun read.
That'll be a fun read.
-Greed stands next to his brothers bloodied but with a sick smile on his face as he is handed the TWE World Championship....-
Greed: Darius!!!! See this -holds the title up- as my brothers said in that war of a match you and I just had, I AM THE TRUE TWE WORLD CHAMPION!!!!! I'm better than you and it will only be a matter of time before this belt bears the name Greed on it rather than Darius. That spit in your face is the disrespect shown to me each and everyday this title bears your name.
Next time, I finish what I started and end your miserable existence as I pin you one, two, three one more time to win back this, my championship. The worst is yet to come....you've been warned.
-Greed walks away with The Sins with the TWE World Championship over his shoulder-
*Kaige goes to the back, grabbing a nearby camera man, and focusing the camera on his face.*
Cage! You cost me my chance at the IronFist title, which would have looked DAMN good on my shoulder, especially when I kick your ass and take that No Limits title from you. You want to hit me from behind, and then Dead Drop me, that's strikes one and two - three is because I just don't like you. Your time with my title is quickly coming to an end! At Eye of the Beholder, I am going to give you the ass-kicking of a lifetime, and take that title right from your unconscious fingers.
You are that worried that I am going to take your title, that you don't want to be responsible for me having TWO titles, so you cost me ONE! Ignorance is overrated, but boy, you are are stupid. I'll see you at Eye of the Beholder, if I don't get my hands on you before then. Say goodbye to that title, because I'm going to take it from you, and make sure you never compete in TWE AGAIN!
*Kaige pushes away the camera and walks down the hallway, using his hand to knock things off boxes and such. He grabs a towel from an attendant and puts it over his head.
Lets get some feedback on the House Show guys!! I did some different things in this one and I hope it paid off and made things better
i really liked the extended house show. Glad to see Cracko had to actually work to keep his title on this house show. Also cool to see yet another woman debut and SIN, anytime they are on a show- its a good thing- maybe not for the others but for SIN it is. I am biased of course
I for one loved this house show. It's one of the better ones that I read. You could see that there was obviously more detail in it. Keep up the good work.
That is something I plan on improving is the quality of the house shows. I feel as though they are a unique selling point in TWE. Something not a lot of feds use.
Best Promo: Krysys, of course. I feel that one line; Safe from everyone here, except me. Made it so the family history they share is more complex than just King Zero coming out to save his brother Carter Krysys and that I look forward to one day seeing unfold.
Best Piece of Booking: The Proving Ground Match. I'm always a fan of those.
Best Debut *when applicable*: I'll go with the newest Vixxen, AshAttack. Weird name name but it was a dead giveaway that it was Ashley Punk making her way to fedding so welcome Ashley to our family here in TWE and look forward to seeing what you do here.
Any Piece of Booking You Didn't Like: Not really.
Any Matches and/or Promos That Could've Been Improved: It's a House Show; It's as good as can be and with the added detail to some of the matches it came out even better than before.
Any Other Positives: The IronFist match. Was a great opener and I'm looking forward to see who seeing who faces Cracko next as Kaige and Scott continue their rivalry going, with the added mystery of Smyth since that's the main storyline followed in the regular shows.
Any Other Constructive Criticism: Nope.
Overall Show Grade: B+
Who controls who in Sin?